rewrite second paragraph of README

Signed-off-by: Sean Whitton <spwhitton@spwhitton.name>

1 files changed, 9 insertions, 7 deletions

diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index 6b42ba1..bcdf065 100644
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -33,13 +33,15 @@ Description: Lisp declarative configuration management system
  unprivileged users, build and deploy containers, and produce disc images.
  .
  Consfigurator's design gives you a great deal of flexibility about how to
- control the hosts you want to configure.  Input and output streams attached
- to an interactive POSIX sh running on the target host (or in the target
- container) is sufficient to use much of Consfigurator's functionality.  But
- if it is possible to get an implementation of Common Lisp started up on the
- host, then Configurator can transparently execute your deployment code over
- on the remote side, rather than exchanging information via POSIX sh.  This
- lets you use the full power of Common Lisp to deploy your configuration.
+ control the hosts you want to configure.  If there is a command you can run
+ which will obtain input and output streams attached to an interactive POSIX
+ sh running on the target host/container, then with a little glue code, you
+ can use much of Consfigurator's functionality to configure that
+ host/container.  But if it is possible to get an implementation of Common
+ Lisp started up on the host, then Configurator can transparently execute your
+ deployment code over on the remote side, rather than exchanging information
+ via POSIX sh.  This lets you use the full power of Common Lisp to deploy your
+ configuration.
  .
  Configurator has convenient abstractions for combining these different ways
  to execute your configuration on hosts with different ways of connecting to